new additions to our film

1. i changed the background music during the male scene to a remix of the black keys lonely boy, the reason for this change is because there is no speech in during the song , it is a remix of the instrumental this was done so it does not interfere with my voiceover and so the voiceover will be more clear further more the instrumental is a lot more upbeat and it suits the character profile.

The black keys-lonely boy remix

2.the second addition to our film was my voiceover in the males scene, this was added in order to create more knowledge on the background of the character plus it gives the viewer an insight of the characters personality. this is the script:"and here i am, mallah, i remember that day crystal clear, i was late for college and i had court the day before that. *sigh* it went really bad i was fined 20 grand but thats ok, im a man that loves to party, known for bizarre encounters, i was the buzz of the party and i didnt really care to what lengths i went to, partying with celebs was the norm, i spent my nights with my idols

but anyway lets get back on track, i was in a  hurry to get to the train station

and thats when i came across her, this was the action that switched my life right round, i fell in love instantly , and little did she know that her life was going to flip upside down"

3. i came up with the idea to embed pictures as the characters are walking, the pictures are based around their backgrounds also, for the females scene the quick snapshots are of her abusive past, some are quite disturbing, this was done to capture how hard hitting and depressing her life was, it also captures the audience's attention finally the pictures add dramatic effect 

4: the final additions to our film was these two close up shots of the characters eyes these were added in order to capture the instant love at first sight that the characters share, it is also dramatic and it helps the viewer identify further the strong attraction they have towards each other