feedback on our film opening pitch

                                                                     feedback


The feedback we received was good by the majority. our teacher's comment was she liked how we contrasted both characters(through the music, setting) this shows we have achieved what we wanted,which was effectiveness through simplicity.

there was 2 questions asked by the class, the first question was "why did we choose to represent the female character as a psychologically challenged person?" my response was that it distinguishes the great contrast between both characters ( a poor, mentally affected female with a rich popular male)

the second question was "what are the ages of the characters and who is your target audience?" my response to this was both characters are 17 years old, and that our target audience ranges from teenagers to adults and appeals to people affected mentally through hardship, and appeals to both the working class and upper class. this is very positive because it means our audience is a lot bigger.